Monday, 4 August 2014

Cross country goals

Annotated reflection

WALT: Write an annotated reflection showing judgement, opinion and analysis.


SC:
1. Use pt verbs that show mental processes i.e think.
wonder, guessed…
2. Use the help/hindered box to structure your writing.
3. Must inform the audience how you improved or did not improve.
4. Must provide example and explanation
on why you became a better writer or not.


...My writing progress made in term 2…


During term 2 we have been focusing on our narrative writing. I think my narrative writing skills have improved a lot, as my writing has now hit at level 5 and I’m feeling really proud of myself.


The things that have helped me to progress in my writing are…


Firstly the Chromebook
The Chromebook has helped my writing to be tidier and more professional.
 
The Read & Write app
The Read & Write app has helped me to know where I have made a mistake or if my story makes sense.


My working buddies comments have made me want to strive to make my stories better. Reading other people’s stories have made me come up with ideas and different words that could fit into my stories and help me make my stories more interesting.

The things that have slowed me down in my writing are…
Taking ages to come up with a new story with good events.
Talking to others and not starting my writing straight away.
Sometimes having to go back to my writing and doing the punctuation correctly and making my stories readable.


Now I know what things have been slowing me down in my writing, I want to now improve my writing by having nothing slowing my writing down and writing more stories that everyone will enjoy and that are more interesting.